Comments on: Ragnarok by Patrick Scalisi

By: Steph

Steph — Sat, 17 Apr 2010 14:23:52 +0000

This was probably one of the best examples of the ability to build suspense to keep readers captivated and unable to stop reading! I also loved the concept/idea of your story; how you incorporated Norse mythology into the modern day was imaginative and inspired. Great job and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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By: Tim Sluiter

Tim Sluiter — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 08:21:51 +0000

Great work Pat,

I love the structure, really.

As with any good story, or with any good reader of,

an ending.

Keep me updated,
tsluiter@gmail.com

Take care and be well.

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By: KP Schoonover

KP Schoonover — Wed, 03 Feb 2010 14:49:29 +0000

I fell in love with this piece the second I started reading it. I love the fresh, contemporary voice Pat has given to Loki and the way he’s portrayed the characters. But mostly why I loved it was it made me laugh. It was entertaining. And–it was such a refreshing change from the “same old stuff.” This is a clever, fun piece of work. Thanks, Pat!

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By: Ali McInerney

Ali McInerney — Wed, 03 Feb 2010 06:29:17 +0000

It is really interesting twist on old mythology, gets better as it goes on. Now I want to know what happens next. Reminds me a little of Gaiman’s American Gods (what little I remember of the story, I need to re-read that some day) which is a compliment.

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By: Rer

Rer — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 23:43:38 +0000